Well the best way to review this is to not compare it to the last one and I won't. So by itself the intro of course was good, but the rise and fall around the climax seemed lacking. Not bad, just that there could of been more there. The best climax is always built up and resolved in detail, although I will say that the end was appropriate. Overall I will give this a 3.5 (rounded up of course). Just expand the rise and fall this song will be in every newb flash and cliche war movies.
Not too original though, meaning I've heard it before with the whole flute solo. Asian influenced definitely. It's good though don't get me wrong, but it almost sounds incomplete. Like the climax has yet to be reached when its all chaos. This does have the whole war story, but lacks the chaotic climax I was waiting for. The rain could have sounded better (probably because it was synthetic). Overall it was pretty good, like the orchestration, balance was pretty good, and bass line and counter melody (while subtle), definitely worked well.
your absolutely right and i wanted to do more, believe me, this is not the finished piece. FL was simply being an ass with the buffering sooo im workin on that. you won't be disappointed when it's finished, i promise =]
Like the gentle flow, the simple melody and especially the slight dissonance around 1:40. the only thing for me is make the counter melody in the beginning other than that this was pretty good.
Put the counter melody into the beginning...but wouldn't that force the song to go too fast? o.o I 'unno T.T, I will think about it, perhaps it would work best that way.
Thanks for the review and the score...
Overall it sounded good, the ambience blended well. The only thing is I personally didn't the sound at the end thats kind of like a sipper. I like the rhythm, just not the voice. I thought it took away from the overall intro. It might work better later because its a silent storm, but for now maybe change the voice of that part or just lower its volume for this part of the song
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